#1 2013-03-15 11:02:24

nedi

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From: Albuquerque, New Mexico

Registered: 2010-05-20

Posts: 20,505

Re: Never.

Това е първото произведение, което се пробвам да пиша на чужд език /и въпреки това знам, че не е добро/. Затова някой добър по английски да ме поправя.
Благодаря.

• Look at the sky, dear.
  What do you see there?
  Your dreams, maybe..
  Something that won't happen?
  You want to see him again,
  but he'll never come back ..
  Back to your life ..
  But he will be in your future,
  you'll meet him always on the street,
  devil pain will hurt you every second he looks at you,
  because you know - you'll never be his.

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[*]And if you're in love, then you are the lucky one,
'Cause most of us are bitter over someone.
Setting fire to our insides for fun,
to distract our hearts from ever missing them.
But I'm forever missing him...[/*]
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lovegackt

Member

From: My imagination *~*

Registered: 2011-09-26

Posts: 3,962

Re: Never.

Хареса ми
Ако позволиш да те поправя:

Look at the sky, dear.
What do you see there?
Your dreams, maybe..
Something that won't happen?
You want to see him again,
but he'll never come back ..
Back to your life ..
But he will be in your future,
you'll meet him always on the street,
devil pain will hurt you every second he looks at you,
because you know - you'll never be his.

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Когато пред теб се изпречи стена, не се притеснявай, изрисувай я!
Нарисувай мечтите, за които не си вярвал че ще се сбъднат.
[img]http://ic.pics.livejournal.com/omgakuto/24609747/35781/35781_900.gif[/img]

nedi

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From: Albuquerque, New Mexico

Registered: 2010-05-20

Posts: 20,505

Re: Never.

Благодаря.    

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[list=*]
[*]And if you're in love, then you are the lucky one,
'Cause most of us are bitter over someone.
Setting fire to our insides for fun,
to distract our hearts from ever missing them.
But I'm forever missing him...[/*]
[/list]

lovegackt

Member

From: My imagination *~*

Registered: 2011-09-26

Posts: 3,962

Re: Never.

Благодаря.    

Пак заповядай

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Когато пред теб се изпречи стена, не се притеснявай, изрисувай я!
Нарисувай мечтите, за които не си вярвал че ще се сбъднат.
[img]http://ic.pics.livejournal.com/omgakuto/24609747/35781/35781_900.gif[/img]

happy girl

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From: Vice city

Registered: 2010-05-30

Posts: 2,358

Website

Re: Never.

На мен много ми хареса ^-^ Много наподобява на моите "драми" : D

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Sometimes it's very hard to move on, but once
you move on, you'll realize it was the best decision you've ever made.

sexy_girlll

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From: ~Summer Paradise~

Registered: 2012-03-13

Posts: 4,219

Re: Never.

Супер е.

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Let’s say goodbye
And never back again, let me cry
I wanted you, you wanted to lie
I knew that it would happen this way.[/*]
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Unstoppablє

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Registered: 2012-08-28

Posts: 9,514

Re: Never.

Страхотно е! 

nedi

Independent

From: Albuquerque, New Mexico

Registered: 2010-05-20

Posts: 20,505

Re: Never.

Благодаряя

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[list=*]
[*]And if you're in love, then you are the lucky one,
'Cause most of us are bitter over someone.
Setting fire to our insides for fun,
to distract our hearts from ever missing them.
But I'm forever missing him...[/*]
[/list]

zaicheto006

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From: .. ^ Dubstep ^ .. - * High Liv

Registered: 2012-06-09

Posts: 1,683

Re: Never.

Харесва ми ..  

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Don't Drink and Drive ..Smoke and Fly !!

Chicharitooo

Member

From: Narnia <3

Registered: 2012-03-04

Posts: 2,119

Re: Never.

Страхотно е! 

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Boy: Knock knock.
Girl: Who is it?
Boy: Marry.
Girl: Marry who?
Boy: Marry me.

drebosy4etu

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Registered: 2009-08-08

Posts: 33,354

Re: Never.

Браво!

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Виждам кога мъжете обичат жените.Те им дават всичко,освен малка чaст от живота си.Но жените,когато обичат,те дават всичко

nedi

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From: Albuquerque, New Mexico

Registered: 2010-05-20

Posts: 20,505

Re: Never.

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[list=*]
[*]And if you're in love, then you are the lucky one,
'Cause most of us are bitter over someone.
Setting fire to our insides for fun,
to distract our hearts from ever missing them.
But I'm forever missing him...[/*]
[/list]