#1 2012-01-04 13:43:12

dOpe

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Registered: 2011-01-16

Posts: 40

Re: What is your New Years Resolution for 2012 and why ?

Това е малко есе за един конкурс, кажете ми какво мислите, надявам се да ви хареса ^^

What is your New Years Resolution for 2012 and why ?

  Everyone have different dreams about life and future, everyone wants to reach diffrent goals and everyone is living in his own way. So what do you thing abot the new year that is coming ? I don't know for you, but for me is going to be something great and I don't want to miss the chance doing something importnat with my life.
  I don't have so much dreams, but all of them are just so unreachable that sometimes I just want to give out on them, but remembering how wonderful would be if they come true makes me continue dreaming. All of my dreams are conected. First I want to graduate school with good diploma and then I want to become an architect. After this I want to start restoration of the colosseum in Rome. With the money I want to go live in Japan or Korea and continue my work and life there. Yeah, I know, it sounds crazy. But I really want to go in Asia. But abything from that can't happen in just one year, so none of this will be me resoluiton for 2012. Then what should I do ? I have never thinked of something like this before. What would you do? No, I don't feel like asking someone, because this is my life and I just can't let someone else to take the decision. I already have good friends, not much, but enought. Good grades? Yes! Happy family ... well, not so happy, but some kids don't even have so I'm grateful for what I have. Time to dream about my future ? More than enought. So what I actually need ? I can't think of anything. I'm healthy, lucky, loved, not alone, good with other people. Do I need something more to live my life happly ? I don't think so. And now I know what my resolution for 2012 will be - to live my life and never look back, to never feel sorry for the mistakes that I made, because without them I wouldn't be the person I am, because I'm happy with myself now, and you guys should love yourself too, much or less, it dosen't matter, the only thing that you have know is that you're perfect just the way you are, you don't need resolutions every year for making yourself a better person or reaching your dreams, your dreams will come true only if you never stop believe in them.
  I think that I kind mess up the topic, so I think that I'll stop here and only wish you good luck with your life!

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pap1ty

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Re: What is your New Years Resolution for 2012 and why ?

Не трябва да пишеш есе за този конкурс, но иначе е добро!   

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SeSiTy1

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Registered: 2011-02-19

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Re: What is your New Years Resolution for 2012 and why ?

Пише се : What do you thinK aboUt... Иначе е много дорбо!
П.П: Провери си го за правописни грешки! Успех!

Brutallity

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Registered: 2010-03-13

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Re: What is your New Years Resolution for 2012 and why ?

Ммммм,като за есе на чужд език става...В есета,официални документи,диктовки,съчинения etc не се съкращава,всичко се пише пълно.И това yeah...не мисля че там му е мястото.

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miss_kapriss_

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Registered: 2011-03-06

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Re: What is your New Years Resolution for 2012 and why ?

Есето е добре замислено, но имаш грешки във времената, има и няколко пунктуационни. Липсват ти Essay words and phrases, написала си го в по-разговорен вид. Там където си писал I think или I don't think можеш да ги замениш защото те са разговорни с In my opinion, in my view, as far I am conected махни съкращенията. Направи го на параграфи.

п.п не се заяждам. Ако искаш да ти помогна да го пооправиш пиши ЛС.

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dOpe

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Registered: 2011-01-16

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Re: What is your New Years Resolution for 2012 and why ?

Не трябва да пишеш есе за този конкурс, но иначе е добро!   

Да и аз мисля, че ме е подходящо :Д За това и не съм го пратила ;д

Ммммм,като за есе на чужд език става...В есета,официални документи,диктовки,съчинения etc не се съкращава,всичко се пише пълно.И това yeah...не мисля че там му е мястото.

Конкурса е организиран от сайт за дрехи, и просто не мислех, че трябва да е много официално :Д

Есето е добре замислено, но имаш грешки във времената, има и няколко пунктуационни. Липсват ти Essay words and phrases, написала си го в по-разговорен вид. Там където си писал I think или I don't think можеш да ги замениш защото те са разговорни с In my opinion, in my view, as far I am conected махни съкращенията. Направи го на параграфи.

Мерси за съвета, бях сигурна, че имам грешки НАЙ-вече с времената, а за разговорните изречения .. не съм се опитвала да го правя официално, за това е написано така ;д И за параграфите, разделено е, но просто като го постнах и се махнаха о.О Не знам защо

п.п не се заяждам. Ако искаш да ти помогна да го пооправиш пиши ЛС.

Изобщо не ми прозвуча като заяждане хД Няма да го оправям, написах го само, за да видя дали ще успея да измъдря нещо :Д

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