#1 2011-12-06 19:24:12

mishitu_

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From: Hawaii

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Re: She seems to be happy

Още нещо от мен.Писано е в час. Може да ви се стори клиширано, но все пак го поствам. =)
И между другото не целя да има рима, така че не се чудете защо я няма.
Приятно четене!

She seems to be happy,
but she cries deep inside.
She seems to be brave,
but she's really afraid.
Afraid of love.
Afraid of loneliness.
She says "It's all right!"
but she wants you
to understand that
she wanna die.
She smiles when you walk away
but you can't imagine
how much she loves you...
And she lives with the pain
that kills her from inside.
'Cause every time
she looks at his face,
she sees your eyes, your smile...
...
She seems to be happy,
but she cries deep inside...

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steffi18

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Re: She seems to be happy

Страхотно е!! (y)  (y)  (y)

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slavencetyy

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Re: She seems to be happy

Уникално е просто! Браво!

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x_alien_x

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Registered: 2010-10-04

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Re: She seems to be happy

Хареса ми , само че си забравила r  на she sees your eyes, your smile...

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faninkata < 33

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Re: She seems to be happy

Харесва ми. И римата ти се е получила.

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mishitu_

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From: Hawaii

Registered: 2009-11-15

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Re: She seems to be happy

Хареса ми , само че си забравила r  на she sees your eyes, your smile...

Поправих си го. =) Много благодаря за хубавите коментари, хора!

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xnekfonikfox

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Re: She seems to be happy

Много ми харесва .. ^^

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Registered: 2010-04-08

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Re: She seems to be happy

I likе it.

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sweet_kiss666

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Re: She seems to be happy

Много ми хареса!

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ronnie

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Registered: 2011-02-21

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Re: She seems to be happy

Хареса ми, и честно казано ми звучи като текс на песен. От мен браво! 

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the_cool_girl_97

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Re: She seems to be happy

харесва ми

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kkalippso

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Re: She seems to be happy

Неповторимо! И рима има.

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Re: She seems to be happy

Хареса ми !

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mishitu_

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From: Hawaii

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Re: She seems to be happy

Благодаря ви!

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poxleitner

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Re: She seems to be happy

Страхотно.

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